The Red City

Is it possible to avoid The Spectacle of Destruction?

Also two pancakes that I never uploaded. I am having a re-think as to use these to show

1. The change of noise from that of constant churning to huge crowd

2. The violence involved in the physical and mental evolution of the city

3. The window cleaner (potential to become main protagonist?)

At the moment the protagonist is The City (from one extreme (me) to the other!), which feels too removed from the scale of the citizen. Perhaps the story needs to be instead told through a combination of the window cleaner and The Hole to contrast the scales of the two, which together make up the city – a battle of scales! Also need to re-work the conclusion to explore the battle result further – will have something for tomorrow!


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