Revisit

Abstraction 2.2-01

I have gone back and revisited what I initially started. In order to establish how the behavioural patterns overlap each other I have annotated the previous drawings. This will help to describe how the behaviours of the estate will interact.

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One Response to Revisit

  1. Natasha Sandmeier says:

    It’s much better!
    My comment is purely a visual / compositional one:

    because the lower right square of the 2d comic is so PINK, it becomes a little discontinuous when the pic doesn’t again appear in the 2nd slightly rotated one. Perhaps we can see it floating up, but behind the corb yayoi frame, and then finally all the way up by the time the comic tower rotates in the 3rd frame?
    all for now.