I thought about all the comments form the jury and i came up with a plan to work on for the final tables.
I want to have 3 Triptychs (9 images in total) that show fragments/views of the factory (never the whole) in 3 different states.
1st: the empty space, structure and all visible – boring and ugly
2nd: the stars filled with glycerin, almost invisible but structure is gone
3rd: the space overloaded with self storage
So i want 3 views of these 3 different states and the transition between states is animated.
I AM RE RENDERING EVERYTHING. I want to be methodic and work on these images to be amazing and self explanatory (or not…cindy style)
So tomorrow i want to discuss the state of the space as it is. determine the snag list of things that need work and then slowly but well i want to render them all in the green room, with all same settings etc etc
I want to kill the part 2 of the film (modernists etc) and have 1 film only that adresses the factory and the thesis) that refer back to cindy and other references at some points. but absolutely make the film about my project.
this will happen while the renders go (MULTI TASKING !!)
I am eating the bloody brussel sprouts and assign 2/3h a day to dump stuff on my white book layout.
the text will have to be re-written to fit the new video format that adresses the thesis only with a few points of reference for support.
5:KIM KARDASHIAN …. still getting my head around. lets discuss tomorrow
but mostly, if you are still reading this post, i am super excited about these next 2 weeks. the jury was amazing and i see it ‘clearly’ now. i have loads to do but i have a golden island felling in me.