Option I – Void in the City

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maybe here the people work better? woking on option II now…

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4 Responses to Option I – Void in the City

  1. Mark McGlynn says:

    Nice image Felix! Keep going!!!!! The people are quite bold in contrast to the green mountain, the eye gravitates to them. Is the intention for there to be a focus on the people as well as the image?

  2. Natasha Sandmeier says:

    I’m not trying to be a ‘scale’ pain but the disparity between our lovely wanderer above the sea of fog, now a wanderer towards a hill of trash, and the church steeple coming out of the hill is a bit extreme. You need to scale the foreground so that by the time the rail tracks enter in to the hill, they are much farther away from us. So squeeze them together so it appears as though we have a few hundred meters between the bottom edge of paper and bottom of hill.

    same comment as always…And make the wanderer smaller.

    The image with more people is slightly better because it lets you shrink the people closer to the hill to suggest the scale better (but the road is still your problem).

  3. Felix Brinkhege says:

    tracks? you mean the tubes/pipes…the road is killing me!!!!!! :)

  4. Natasha Sandmeier says:

    hahaha. yes i guess i mean the pipes – they looked like train tracks. OMG let’s just finalise it tomorrow!