as it stands

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will change in line with comments now i aim to print today- and do presentation tm. comments welcome

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2 Responses to as it stands

  1. Natasha Sandmeier says:

    top one:
    bigger disco ball so we only see the bottom half of the ball?

    middle one:
    slightly more gradient-darker sky at top of image. stars are too big & bright. more subtlety. looks like a party.

    bottom one:
    ‘WTF’ I think is the correct term I’m looking for. I can’t even wrap my head around it.
    is great.
    the matte backdrop looks slightly flat at the far edge so it looks more like a photoshop layer than a backdrop. I’m not entirely sure how to fix this other than to sharpen the far edge/darker line. also looks like the camera is cut off by the matte (aka photoshop overlay) so maybe if we could see a bit of the base wooden frame, or the remote control cables for the camera coming out from behind the matte on the right would make the thing sit in the image a bit better.
    OR just move the picture on the wall way over to the right more. it’s chopped too centrally.

  2. Natasha Sandmeier says:

    and if you already printed, disregard all comments!